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Don’t you admire life when you stop and glance,
Doesn’t it make you question?
Today I questioned black and white,
Love also many eons over.
When I stopped walking I witnessed many things,
These came with answers.
I did try to decline what I heard too many times,
But no crying man can escape the open truth.

When a broken heart is broke,
That is where I rest.
In between the defeat and affection,
A love lost is negative in a positive.
Makes everything unhinged,
The house which we subsist in existence falls apart.
Now I stand exposed and stripped,
In the cascading rain.

I distinguish black and white with the heart,
Inside the heart the light glows clear.
But when you shatter it with a hammer,
Obscurity triumphs and the light dies.
So is this darkness now?
Is the light departing?

But in the horizon,
I see a light shining bright.
Its your heart waiting for me,
There is still light and love.
Love…
©2004-2009 ~jackio37
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But in the horizon,
I see a light shining bright.
Its your heart waiting for me,
There is still light and love.
Love…
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:iconsilentscream47:
i love how you end this on a positive note, unlike most down love poems that end in blah.. you know??

beautiful words.

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-*- marisa
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My Poetry ~ My Photography Account
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:iconnosugarjustanger:
beautiful... :heart:

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:icondreamingfairy:
awwww, so sweet

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expect the unexpected,
never fall to those who oppose you,
keep your head up high,
and never let the enemy see your weakness
:iconjuno-remixed:
Pretty beautiful.
You're very talented in expressing feelings. Nice work on this one.
:iconimhidinginthebushes:
wow thats great!!!!!!!! i LOVE it!

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Lying Is The Most Fun A Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off-Panic! at the disco
I've got more wit, a better kiss, a hotter touch, a better fuck
Than any boy you'll ever meet, sweetie you had me
Girl I was it look past the sweat
:iconfinalgamer:
very nice, I love it. Where there is light, there is always the shadow, I once heard. :+favlove:

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Boredom is the breeding ground of Creativity

Semper Fidelis tu Natura. . .:cling:
:iconsandyle85:
really cool :D

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war has changed
:iconjackio37:
Yes thankyou, I like to think positively.

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Back and in white.
:iconjackio37:
Thanks :)

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Back and in white.
:iconjackio37:
Thankyou :D

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Back and in white.

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