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The well of people by ~jackio37:iconjackio37:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Are you people actually so off-putting of your own ways?
Go kill and massacre your own souls for the captivating.
Adjudicate me for the person as I,
Yet the face which wilt of your centre of sensation.
Is the vital hypocritical infestation?
Questioning the unquestionable?

Making I the architect of the speeches,
Which orbits around thyself and vicinity.
Contradict their own selves,
Losing their purpose because of you!
O you lost souls look at the rant and open,
Open something to embrace.

Quivering the head is the only motion,
Of downhill ways.
Bearing the weight of the tragedy,
So O’ so deathly calamity.
Look at the changing airstreams,
and you are gone…
By yourself.
©2005-2009 ~jackio37
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Making I the architect of the speeches,
Which orbits around thyself and vicinity.
Contradict their own selves,
Losing their purpose because of you!
O you lost souls look at the rant and open,
Open something to embrace.
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*crazcat Aug 25, 2005, 8:19:43 AM
I really like this one! I know I haven't commented in a long time *hands the aussie a cookie*, I've been busy. I actually am a subscriber or something now... I dunno how that happened, I bought a prints account... maybe its a free gift or something. dunno. anyways... I love the way this sounds... It's almost as if you are giving the masses their last speech, as they watch on. I can see this animated into a movie scene, you on a pedestal.. or rather.. just someone.. and seas of undefined faces staring on, as bombs explode in the background in a city gray and uniform. *and their goes my imagination* its too early. I'm going back to bed.

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**Rainy days and automatic weapons always get me down**

Always remember that you're unique . . . just like everyone else.

I don't bite.. much..=crazcat

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~San-chan Aug 25, 2005, 3:35:26 PM
This one is really good! I like this alot!

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.....It fucking means "Ninja" in Japanese.

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~circularthinker Aug 25, 2005, 9:06:57 PM
your use of language is very idiosyncratic, i like it.
it has a very sharp quality.
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~Aussie-Sweetheart Aug 26, 2005, 7:12:31 PM
This is beautifuly written, and I agree with what *crazcat said.
Great Work Mate

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~FinalGamer Aug 27, 2005, 6:10:41 AM
Very nice, glad to see your work again Jackio! Always a pleasure to read your talent

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Boredom is the breeding ground of Creativity

Semper Fidelis in Naturam. . .:cling:
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~syzzlechicka1013 Sep 6, 2005, 4:21:16 PM
Wow, Jack, I miss you so much!! *Puppy dog eyes.*

Mmmkay. Now that that's been said... =p I love the work you do with human nature pieces. This is another wonderful example.

"Adjudicate me for the person as I,
Yet the face which wilt of your centre of sensation."

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we're all chior boys at best.
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